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Split · 07-01-2014, 07:40 PM

Zen.

Cut the filler. And randomness. You aren't dull. Some good bits.

Ra. Don't write about yourself like a cosmic god, so trite & unapproachable. Decent rhythm.

Had Zen.

07-01-2014, 07:40 PM	#6
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899398	Zen. Cut the filler. And randomness. You aren't dull. Some good bits. Ra. Don't write about yourself like a cosmic god, so trite & unapproachable. Decent rhythm. Had Zen. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com