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Originally Posted by Big Game
I already know your lame ass gonna drop nothing so i'll just by-pass that situation quickly.
But if you had any sense you can find all kinds of twists in that verse actually - and that was very quickly written - you couldn't do that in a week.
That verse is mostly to do with nameplay - him being LSD
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No need for the negativity here. I'm being all friendly too. Plus, I'm just trying to help you see where your weak points are and how you can improve. If you really want, I can quote some verses here, too.
And yes, I got your lines. No worries. And yes, it wasn't bad. For a quick drop against someone really bad, it might even be enough to win. But would you call your line wordplay creative? I mean, honestly: Can you really say that you're proud of yourself for that line? Because I'm sure you yourself have seen that type of line done maaany times before. Hell, even J.R. just posted a coke line here. :(