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Originally Posted by Big Game
I just dropped this verse today on short notice - I forgot about it and dude had a weak verse - he didn't even rhyme - so I just threw this together quickly. The illuminati bar you would have to see his drop that named that to understand the punch.
Dudes name was L.S.D
Nothing special but it displays some of my skill
Expos
*** He’s from South Africa
*** Joseph Kony: The most brutal and known African rebel leader
Annnnd Go Time
Did this bum think he’d take the win - one hit will fucking break his chin
Take a look at his name again – who don’t know LSD’s paper-thin?
Your verse aint rhyme one time – and I don’t want to stir confusions
Cos I know ya thought it was rhyming but L - that was pure illusions
I come to damage ya amateur – my hits collapsing your scapula
You and your verse headed South and I aint talkin bout back in to Africa
Your drop was all statements and that statement there was coerced
Or maybe that was your expos – so where the fuck is your verse???
Expressing aggression straight coming at me all rude and cocky
Dudes mad as hell – sure that verse aint part two of the illuminati?
I aint even gonna come with rawl shit - I aint even gonna take my time
You’re like an aids infested coce whore - on you I wouldn’t waste a line
But If I fuel these bars with hatred they become explosive homie
Fucking terrorize your South African ass like I was Joseph Kony
Dawg you was falling regardless – and this here was just an ad-lib
You got dropped – but to make ya feel better, go head and call it a bad trip
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You're not even that bad. If you battled here some more and started to weed out your played lines, you could become decent. As I said, line wordplay is really old. And that's not a good look. Same with the head south bar. That kinda shit is too simple. But yeah, you have the basics down.
Oh and Kony is from Uganda. Not South Africa. Just a little heads-up.