Inno i thought your short verse didnt do you any justice this week, it didnt really have much substance to it tbh. There was no real development throughout and felt like a story that had no real ending. But mechanically it wasnt too bad, some areas might need fixin up tho..seemed like u just rushed the verse this week. Pat u had a nice concept and approach that i was feelin here, executed well and without a doubt took this one.
v/ Patrown
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