flow was good. There were a few awkward transitions, but eh.
your content was EXCELLENT. YOU GET IT. THIS IS ALL A LIE. DEPRESSION IS NOT THE ANSWER, ENLIGHTENING OTHERS IS. THIS WAS DOPESAWCE HOMEY.
btw...your underlined line really nailed it.
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Originally Posted by Consensus
The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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