Vin: your story was cool, but nothing breathtaking....there was not enough character development, and no reason to the season you feel me?? you got mad skills though, no doubt, just wasnt feeling this bro.
Adonis
Tired of my only mistake.
Tired of trying to change you for Christ's sake.
Tired of hate directed at me with cause,
The loss of virgin boys that wear the cloth,
Creating more bullets then I can create souls,
The population control - The creation of wars,
Praying for more... A raise of income,
“Granted” - Buy a house – Back to square one,
The mortgage and fun, the college loan spent on ones.
The ones sent on stage to the girls who parade a display,
How great. You humans are gifted at making mockerys,
The climactic debauchery.... The “Oh God!”...It's me,
I'm disgusted and tired; no more mistakes.
You humans shall perish like my son on stakes.
I created you in a day; and in a day you'll be gone.
Earth persists and forgives... And now can finally live on.
^that was excellent! I was feeling the enormity of that! mvgt adon
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The cerebral assassin, the molder of minds, the Omni potent being. Time transcending traveler, wisdom incarnate. Veritas needs no intro but I guess I have to. He’s not know in the battling world but who doesn’t know veritas? The guy us always original and if you pay attention to his bars, dude brings the heat.. The gawd.
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