listening
beat feels on some grooovy shits, i fux with it
damn, i hated the way you opened this up holmes, the whole remember me/chemistry/pedigree shit...maaan, i know some people might like that if they just hear it...i listen to shit...& that the way opened this track up sounded whack as fuck to me...just my opinion, no apologies for the bluntness...
made me want to not listen anymore
i carried on though, the rest of the verse i didnt have so much of a problem,..flowed somewhat more organic, still some lines i didnt like...'best are contagious/infect this location'...eh, im not mad at it, but i exactly fuck with it either...similar shit with nosebleed line...im just keepin it a thousand with you nigga, the shit you saying just sounds uninspired as fuck...minus the begining, you're delivery i can fuck with...but not much else
if this came on on some random playlist i was listening to, the beat would have my head knocking, the shits nice, but i'd be looking for that next track button soon as you started rappin holmes
shit, a lil harsh i know, just my honest muhfuckin take though i cant give you no one elses, i give my praise just as blunt, take it how you want though
...final note...the hook is bless, so good job on that i guess
be easy #1
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