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Old 06-16-2014, 03:56 PM   #9
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Wow I was expecting a lot closer than this tbh. Vulgar from the first 2 lines I could tell the setting flow and imagery was gonna be dope an you held my interest all the way through. Timeless on the other hand had a verse that seemed like you felt defeated before you even started writing. I've seen a ton better man but you started it off way too simple and never really recovered imo but wither way the concepts were both cool and atleast had some awesome ideas from both but I got vulgar with the much better execution.
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