i let the gun blaze, stay reaching for heat to bang fores!
if shots coming from nine iron, its just tiger competing on the green during PGA tours
you've been destroyed son, im on my job once a line start
you could start biting dull writtens to get ya point off, still wouldnt be on ya grind sharp
sharpie could've been used correct, it was not. corny tbh. killer whale umm like wail on him? or is his alias whale? idk it wasn't great though. gunplay is kinda lame and iron/golf is a bit used, but okay nameplay for a newbie tourney. like give S an L? is so played if not then just weak. anything involving snoop and being high is a played concept. u at least tried somethin decent with the closer so i'll give it to u it wasn't good though.
vs
I hold weight with chicks. They always ring this man's cell
But you don't get a single call... 'slike you ain't worth a Graham, Bell
Guy's trash, no problem for me to shake this whore
If anyone feels Camp fire they just got ambitious making s'mores
how bout you drop less than 14 for once? prolly give your verse stability
cuz its clear you're just pushing the limit with both your lines and mental ability
ppl love me rising the ranks, but you get all scoffs, son
think anyone hopes Bell tower? Nah, they just wish you'd fall off one
graham bell was fire. nah @ ghostwriter. camp fire was cool the wording wasn't terrific but still got there. seen grindstone bars done much better. pushing the limit i've seen but the wording was good so i'll give it to ya. i've seen a few tower/fall off lines but this was okay, u could've connected more with it being more than a normal tower but it was alright
v/Sharp easy, his misses were better, less played shit better wording
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