I could definitely tell timeless wasn't feeling this image this week, as his piece read like a quick key thrown together with no real foundation set. It was a simple script but had some nice phases of thoughts/ideas. I understand when you're not feeling a topic/image it's difficult to write to because of lack of inspiration. But with the playoffs up next you will have to really put in the effort and expand your horizon even if the topic/image isn't favorable. Vulgar you had a real nice written piece and I liked the direction you went. Your writing has definitely picked up lately and here it was solid. The ending stood out most because it tied everything together. A great statement that sums up your story and connects to the image too.
MVGT: Vulgar. Good job by both competitors.
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