Overall: zygote. Much better execution of verse and topic. I felt both took rather decent takes on the picture but I felt Certain didn't flesh out his piece to the point where his stood out. Certain also had wording issues that broke up his piece. Both pieces had decent flow with strong vocab. In the end, zygote really put his piece together better and it worked well in my opinion.
Decent battle, guys.
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