been listening to it. you have a couple spots where you tried to speed flow to catch up with your syllable hits. thought those areas could use improvement. maybe just on your emotion during those spots. felt like your delivery was pretty strong until you start flowing quicker to catch up and thats where the delivery lacks. not sure who is who vocally. seems like you have a few different people on some tracks? not sure... could just be the way it was produced or just a small flaw in your punchins?
but yo... holla for a collab man, havnt recorded in a while but def down to write in OM with you until i can get back in the studio. hit me
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