Dictionary meaning of Dystopia:
'an imaginary place where the people in it lead dehumanized lives'
.as a general rule of thumb if u gotta explain ur punches they are not gonna be good...
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Wtf? That wack name describes u perfectly & da rhymes u type aint ill
u're da Dystopian from an imaginary place which doesnt exist like ur skill
... And this is no exception
Yeah, Vinzr's from Sydney and i dont give a fuck if u split his cap in two
funny.. last week u left that Austrailian Open, this week my Tennis smashin u
tennis wp played but the personal kinda makes it cool
da awards, da medals & plaques aint urs. So stop fronting with da keys
we'll never see a Dystrophy... i just hope he dies from dat muscular disease
cool, good np and set up well
u're a bitch so stop acting like u're ready for war or i'll leave ur ass buried
u're not dressed for da STORM.. u just wear skirts & take pics w/ dat blackberry
nah didn't do anything for me
u're a gay with sloppy wording and u lack the wit for this shit
fag! i told u get the Flo on Point... u tried luring him to touch da tip of ur dick
.ehhhh nah not really digging it
vs
Should I tell em Rayge is the dope article, and RB thought he was wonderful?
Sarcasm has some deep depths, but I don't think A.O.B. is that gullible.
bland, statementish
So Ill just handle Rayge like anger management, coz there's no doubt he fakes it,
Always thinking he drops outrageous, when all we see is what a dropout Rayge is.
cool, not bad. Could have been better by setting up the 'dropout' diss a bit more in the first line
This fake jerks just paperwork to me, Imma take his head for a memento,
Have him pressed to the wall under attack, like didn't you get the memo?
a tack wp played... Liked how u worded the flip tho
Plus he's got such an evil bitch, that wont fuck him coz he's feeble as shit,
So its ironic that she loves the syringes, but won't touch his needle Dick.
not bad
Probably coz this crinkled up dudes a seasoned fag, that cringes from the truth,
So now I'm showing raisin the box, finally berrying this wrinkled old fruit
the raisin/ray's in and 'wrinkled old fruit' was a dope concept, but the berrying bit was corny IMO.
both of y'all showing a lot of potential in this. I was impressed. Both just need to work on wording to make it harsher and have more swag, and also learn what's played, but that only comes with being around a while.
Got Dystopian here with more stuff I liked
V/ Dystopian
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