[Adonis]

Objective - I really liked this concept..You gave the character life with your words... But I loved the concept of an artist drawing in his later stages of life that's so far gone he doesn't realize "The Panda" Art was even his. I thought that was mad slick. As far as mechanics, can't say enough praise for the imagery/connection you gave me. Flow was rather good except for the "autistic/Narcissistic" as well as "Oppenheimer/Alzheimer" bars. The first didn't flow, in fact threw me off the flow quite a bit. The second was key to the plot and you needed it there or the entire piece wouldn't work, However, I simply didn't like the rhyme, it seemed too simple or something IDK? All in all like I said, I really did enjoy the verse, very short yet concise and to the point. Thorough.

Ink - Talk about details bro. The imagery you conveyed was pure, the emotions you brought forth were real, before the topic was revealed I was picturing a gorgeous women so yes, the imagery did wonders. Wasn't a huge fan of the finisher in terms of Rhyme, but loved it for this concept. I can tell you take your time while writing and select words with purpose, which I appreciate greatly.

Vote - only verses I've read and I can say this should be the unquestioned BOTW. Each of you had short verses flowed rather well and jam packed with imagery enough to salivate my mouth. You both used the topic extremely well taking very different approaches yet both having great affect. I enjoyed both verses and know, this is a tough vote. Extremely close. But in the end, IMO, Ink wins due to having less (what I perceive) as hiccups. Close bout, BOTW.