[dead man]

first line was pretty fantastic.

New perspectives forcing him to choose direction. The more you live the more you sense that your convictions aren't you forever.

sharp.

I see the chinks in your armor. I read your needs. I can author a piece of your dreams so it seems you're asleep when I speak.

headshot.

i like how you pick apart psychic mannerisms that are more-or-less universal and attack them head-on. you are a conscious observer for better or worse. chained to your strange sense of awareness. i imagine its difficult and makes you sad. its hard to catch your wave and float on under these conditions. you've dropped anchor and opted to sit on the beach.

your writing is insightful to the point of instability. its anxiety-producing and insecure. comfortable in it's scaly skin. almost a shame to admit how highly it resonates..

thanks


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