This was great. Worthy of HOF. I'll leave better feed later when I'm off work.
EDIT: My bad. Forgot to feed earlier. The rhyming throughout was very impressive, but the emotion in this was the strongest point. In the beginning there was a hint of doubt with the I don't know lines, and not writing for six months. But by the end, the birth of your niece resolved the feelings of doubt. I can relate to that same feeling when my niece was born. Very good piece here oats.
Last edited by Zen; 06-14-2014 at 05:44 PM.
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