Zen- this came off dark and personal. Whatever place you channeled this from made this feel genuine and relatable. It wasn't over the top or box office cinematic but you got the point across as a normal person facing a real set of dilemmas. I appreciated that. Good job.
King Ra.- damn. This felt short. I really wanted more. I'm pissed. JAMES CAMERON ONLY MADE PART 1 DAMMIT IT! WHERE'S THE REST?! Lol. Nice piece. The rhyming and concise nature of this piece came off very polished and package in a flashy format. I thought it was a nice touch to play off your name and go Egyptian. Overall pretty cool piece. Good job.
I don't know who to vote for. Both grabbed me in completely different ways. Zen attempted an attack on emotion while Ra. Came with guns blazing in his signature epic fashion . Fuck. MVGT Zenland for a more genuine and down to earth experience. Thanks both you guys for showing :)
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