This is a weird match up to vote on. Bladed impressed me with his rhyming and good use of language to give descriptions and tell his story. As for the story itself, the topic choice was a cool one, but there wasn't much that centered around the topic too well. On the flip side, patrown had a shorter piece, but the story was WTF. Now that's not necessarily a bad thing. I was very intrigued from start to finish, so kudos on probably the most creative story this week. Unlike your opponent, your rhymes/writing left much to desire. This wasn't as clean as you usually write, but it was decent enough. Difficult one to choose from. I'm gonna go with Bladed though. patrowns story left me scratching my head more than anything. I feel if he was a tad more in depth in creating a backdrop to explain what exactly what was going on and why, I'd probably have gone his way. While Bladed didn't necessarily have the more original spin, and didn't do well in tying the topic into his story completely, I felt his scheme and good descriptions, along with a more full on story did just enough to steal it. But this ones very close to call.
MVGT: Bladed Thesis. Good job by both competitors.
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