Overall: Vulgar. I felt Vivid's piece probably had the stronger topical take on it but he just didn't develop it very well. Both were strong with vocab and wording, multies were also good from both. In the end, it came down to Vulgar working his topic better and giving the reader a strong full verse and developing each part of it.
Good battle, guys.
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