[Adonis]

Very close bout. You both had key movements of vivid imagery, one of the earth,the other of carnal bedroom sins. I can't say I loved either, you've both dropped shit far superior than this. I felt like you both played it safer them usual in the flow department as well. In the end though, both of these were satisfying reads and a very similar level. It's a tough vote. I'm always such a huge fan of ending the world and ancient God's and shit so Vulgar played well to that. On the other hand, the raw emoting in vivids imagery was pretty clean and I equally enjoyed it. So in the end, for me anyways, it came down to the humor factor. Did vivid play the right card with those final lines of the girl having aids, the dude finding out he has cancer, but her basically saying, look, you got bigger issues. I loved it.



Voting vivid in what is very eerily similar in terms of mechanics and imagery. Good shit boys.