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Old 06-08-2014, 12:36 AM   #10
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When ydk feels like its okay to ask Black to collab you know need to step it up!



Mixed some lines I liked into a little mini verse

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iron lemonade. paper acid hydrochloric, entranced
by the sound of it. it's counterfeit. please pour me a glass
leaking larynx fluid onto canvas for paint
savage and saint. eating passion fruit and masking the pain
ambrosian the plates, tectonic monolith shape-shift
mass recolonization. anthropological matrix
kafkaesque, the jaded. it was a novel mistake
allowing me to occupy this column of space
microcosmos retraced.
i'll take a warm bullet over heartless embrace
starry your gaze. stacked like Giza's architectural slaves
Pharaoh pheromones. Imhotep's ancestral remains
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