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I'm beginning to appreciate big baby's feed. irrespective of the constant tense changes which is lol considering he's always criticizing people and his somewhat audacious/impertinent comments I can see the power of his mind working. Good feed

Vulgar I thought this was dope homie. First half or so was the best part. Felt you were more focused in the beginning. It's always a pleasure to read your material and sometimes it takes a few reads for me to get the underlying vibes to it, which is prob completely off based compared to what you meant. Lol @ the ending's twist. I feel you get caught up in one particular aspect sometimes like wording or imagery whereas my fav pieces from you have always been more distanced from the action, encompassing one or more distinct characters, or even settings/ideas which you have characterized - like a wise fucking Aesop eagle viewing the story as it unfolds from above.

but yeah good shit fam look fwd to more