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Old 06-07-2014, 01:51 PM   #8
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lol this guy said Delphian...

Being trapped in the prison of your own mind, the masks that we wear and the sheer weight and gravity of life all resound powerfully in this verse. The mark of a cunning observer, a heightened consciousness and possibly a rabid cunnilinguist. Also encompasses all three major themes of life (love freedom death) Really picked up from here:

time to reevaluate the roads that you've taken
when egoism overtakes your social engagements (tru dat)
ambrosian the plates, tectonic monolith shape-shift
mass recolonization. anthropological matrix
kafkaesque, the jaded. it was a novel mistake (WOOO)
allowing me to occupy this column of space
microcosmos retraced. manifest the marvelous. wait
let me let it breathe. take a minute. pause and replay -
for honesty's sake let's all just admit it, we're fake (damn)
i'll take a warm bullet over heartless embrace
starry your gaze. stacked like Giza's architectural slaves
Pharaoh pheromones. Imhotep's ancestral remains
the only conviction that never led me astray:
shoot the messenger but kill the one the messenger blamed
stasis still provides a rather comfortable state
cuz every step forward is a step in the grave
can't help but feel like everything i write is in vain
because it never feels the same. the worst addiction is change
but that's nature and it stays. human conditions are strange
nothing like the sciences could ever explain. like
if April can extinguish a particular flame
we'll abandon dry shelter just to sit in the rain
sit with me and speak beneath the willow at 5
limbs warping under pressure like developing minds (damn)
speak and make me real to you. i'm rotting inside
it's like the only thing i fear is being alive

9.5/10

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