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Zen · 06-07-2014, 01:03 PM

Bladed Thesis: First thing I've read from you and I'm impressed. There were sections where your multi's like "enlightened by torch", but for the most part they were excellent. The eyes to the hordes section in particular was great. As for the content, it was cool. Mitch would love this. Nice work.

patrown: Holy fuck at that ending. That's some exorcist shit there. Like Adonis said I could tell that some lines were rushed, specifically whenever you'd transition to a new rhyme scheme. That being said, some lines were great like the encased in/amazement bar. They flowed perfectly. The topic you took with it was kind of a stretch and by the end I wanted to know what the fuck that thing was, but it just ends. Still, I dig this.

V/BT it was close imo

06-07-2014, 01:03 PM	#5
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Bladed Thesis: First thing I've read from you and I'm impressed. There were sections where your multi's like "enlightened by torch", but for the most part they were excellent. The eyes to the hordes section in particular was great. As for the content, it was cool. Mitch would love this. Nice work. patrown: Holy fuck at that ending. That's some exorcist shit there. Like Adonis said I could tell that some lines were rushed, specifically whenever you'd transition to a new rhyme scheme. That being said, some lines were great like the encased in/amazement bar. They flowed perfectly. The topic you took with it was kind of a stretch and by the end I wanted to know what the fuck that thing was, but it just ends. Still, I dig this. V/BT it was close imo Last edited by Zen; 06-07-2014 at 01:06 PM.