Damn, what happened Viv? Either you couldn't finish your piece before the deadline or you just weren't feeling the topic this week and didn't want to no show? Mysteries of the unknown. Cyp her, first time reading something from you. This was a well written story. Good mechanics, interesting scheme, hard to catch at times or maybe it was intentional? I wouldn't say the story is intriguing, a prisoner who breaks out of prison, definitely would have had to come up with some creative spins to make it such, but this was a safe route and tied to the topic well. I'm interested in seeing how you write the rest of the season and in the playoffs if you still participate.
Simply enough, cyp her takes this easily. Don't know what exactly happened with Vivid this week, would have been interesting to see him at full strength.
MVGT: cyp her. Good job by both competitors.
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