[Adonis]

Vivy - Your verse had the best humor in it I've seen thus far in this season. The flow was choppy as fuck, but the content was actually good IMO. Shit had me laughing for sure, you're not getting my vote though. Sorry bro.

Cy - again, you come with that poetic vibe that I can honestly say I love. You did have a typo in like the 5th to last line or so, and that shit urked me bad. But the verse for what it was, well, I enjoyed it to say the least. The rhyming did wow, but the language did. I don't mind this one single bit. The story was decent, I liked the concept but must be honest. I feel like it lacked a bit of pizzaz or meat in the middle portion. You wrote a list-like verse. example. I climbed the wall, I open the door, hid under the camera. While the language inside these lines were good, I feel like a little more flare, not so much list but simply adding more meat to action and emotion would have secured a stronger victory

Vote Cyph - overall better but Vivid did drop something I enjoyed for what it was.