cyph her - Cool verse by a writer who is showing many unique sides of storytelling. You told the story in an unorthodox way, verbalizing every experience and turn of events by the main character in maximum clarity. I don't know if I can quantify that anything significant happened in this; escaping, only to be shoved into a more restricted institution for his troubles. I thought it was a good 'lesson' of sorts about how following the wrong advice can happen repeatedly and lead to worse conditions in life.
Vividlyvague - C'mon son. Cheers for the easy voting link. :-)
Vote - cyph
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