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Old 05-31-2014, 04:46 PM   #3
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Everything dullboy writes is with a diagonal blade cut, go parallel u wack faggot

lol

I see the chinks in your armor. I read your needs. I can author a piece of your dreams so it seems you're asleep when I speak. I can conjure
peace in your chakra and release where you're haunted;
so long as you believe in its offers. I sell you opinions. Perhaps you need to be teased and intrigued for belief to be honored.
^^That was dope as fuck.

The structure of this was cool to me. The way it was seperated into seperate stanzas, sometimes in mid sentence, helps the reader match the flow and pace as you intended. The coolest piece I've read from you in awhile.
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