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Old 05-31-2014, 03:30 AM   #4
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It seems like it cuts off mid sentence at the end there. Either that is intentional - the narrator is dying or Vividlyvauge just might have misclicked and forgot to copy and paste the rest. Cyph her was good again, it is very nice to see direct and accurate language without the need to shoehorn in multiple rhymes. I like it, it's very straightforward and easy to understand. Voting for cyph her.
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