[Adonis]

Impatient is what was intended I believe as inpatient is just out of place, although would have worked if you played the conceptual cards right. I enjoyed this verse very much. Captivating in one read, solid flow and wonderful pace. A simple story done right is not a bad thing, proof.

BOTW no contest. CK, this is your best work in my opinion, perfect timing. I have not read a single vote but I would imagine there being multiple ties throughout. I do see Frank's style being more voter friendly, but CK's imagery and somber feel is just superb. I enjoyed reading multiple times my friend. There are a few missteps in either spelling or tense, but I get that from you a lot even though I know you take time while writing, so I can't really fault because you just aren't there in terms of being a natural English speaker I guess. I digress... The ending was nice, the view of a book on a muddy bank with the tale of acceptance of death was even nicer. I don't think acceptance is the proper word, but that is def the feeling I got while reading this. Almost like that was your final stab at humor as she accepted death. It worked.

Very tough vote. Frank had this pace and story that just gelled and flowed in the brain while reading. On the other hand CK wrote shit that I simply enjoy, lovely imagery with a hidden meaning that is different for everyone. "Hung like a dream catcher attached to a spiders web of natural latex" WOW!

Voting CK for writing something I fully enjoyed. I loved the execution of franks story, but in all honesty it's hard for me not to vote against CK as the reading is simply something I could read out of a poetry book and mark that page number just so I could read it later. Dope battle boys.