Adonis - a mellow, nuanced and somber auto bio chronicle heightened by what was a generally high level wording and striking contemporary litterature-styled imagery (which, to me personally, can be a little overbearing).
Vulgar - you accomplished one thing primarily: your breath animated an entire world (akin to some character in a book I read as a child). This was a terrific example of how to construct a logical premise in the fantastical.
Vulgar stirred my imagination more and provided in essence a truer depiction of what a concrete jungle is. Kewl battle guys.
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