Close contest, Ceral killer gets a 8/10 for rhyme schemes -2 points for overly complicated words when normal language would suffice. Frank gets a 6/10 for unambitious plot-line with +2 point for rhyme scheme. Cool thing to call a character 'The Stickman' - it gives a nice atmosphere. It is basically Frank's tight concise story against a more abstract tangential thing about infatuation. Voting for CK.
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