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Old 05-23-2014, 05:53 PM   #3
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The first few lines of this were brilliant imo. They were worded perfectly and had a smooth flow to it. Then once you got to the math/path bar the lines were too stretched for my taste. Mitch had a good point too about that lie line. Seemed a little awkward in the wording. I dig this though.
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