Don't know why this is getting slept on, some quality shit in here. Sometimes the lines was abit long, but nothing that detracted from the overall feel of the verse. Enjoyed several parts, but particularly this:
''Dissection of the Queen of hearts, I section off this feeble target
Peel apart the dealers cards, I test my oath to shield it's honor
Set the flow and let it grow like vegetables in fields of farmers''
^Love the flow and set up of the sentences.
''Admit defeat, I'm dropping X and I split the Ces like the hand of Moses
Chant the code, you're not passin home cause the competitions advanced opponents
I'm monsterous and span the globe like Donner, Blitzen, but not fictitious
Coffin calls for doctor visits in shaman clinics to stop his sickness''
^Even though I felt the second sentence here could have been worded better after the first comma it still flowed well and was dope, just think it could have been even better. Either way, I liked this section a lot as well.
Cool shit.
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