listened twice
this was cool overall i kinda liked it
keep it rugged not something i'd bump...though just for a couple reasons, the beat im not feeling all that much, piano is bless, the rest uh the shit just dont sound mixed right (i dont know shit about all that so take it for what it is...just a preference).
another reason being your delivery, in parts...i just dont like it, some shit just sounds overly pronounced, it is clean no doubt, but just certain inflections seem inauthentic to me...maybe you just talk like that, iunno, im just sayin what the phonk im feelin from what im hearing.
anyway, all that shit aside, like i said i did like it, the actual verse was on point, only line i didnt like was the 'over your heads...kitchen cabinets' line...i get how it followed on to the whole mix in additives - sugarcoat thing, i aint mad at it, was just the only line stood out to me for the wrong reason.
on a more positive note n shit, '
stress levels at a maximum, write it down...there's no masking it'
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'i wouldnt change it for nothing, tryna face a public with no idea that im saying suttin...sharing is a pain i discovered...at a loss for how granted we take one another
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' << i fucked with all that shit
didnt mind the listen nigga, & i can appreciate the verse, no offence intended with nunna the shit i said, buh take the muhfucka however you want it
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