I lol'd at the Pharell line. The opening flowed great, but then I thought it fell off a little off at the cocky and abrasive. It picked back up again, but I think if you reworded a few sections this would be flawless. I remember reading one of your pieces awhile back on here and loved it. It was HOF nom'd if I'm remembering right. Ill be checking your shit out. Peace.
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