Certain, interesting take here. I wonder if this is a bit of your own personal feelings, in relation to your life and whatnot. Has that touch a bit. If not, you did a great job disguising it as such. It has that personal feel. Definitely an interesting approach. Your writing is always very precise. Read smoothly for the most part. I thought you had some good phrases here and there, and good descriptions. I wonder if the she you were speaking of is "writing" personified.... the ending made me think so and was a good way to conclude your piece. Vintage Vulgar. Heavy on content. Something I haven't read from you much season. Very mechanical-like but you give it some form of life... the beginning and then towards the end. The meat in-between fit in nicely. I didn't feel overwhelmed by all the concepts, though it almost started getting a bit much but you transitioned from that well towards the end.
I feel both did solid in their own right here and this match is pretty close. Certain wrote very well, had a more personal touch while Vulgar went with a content packed display of norm. I feel Certain did very well here, but Vulgar took a much more better direction with this picture in this match, and think he packed in enough to outshine Certs precise, personal touch.
MVGT: Vulgar. Good job by both competitors.
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