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Old 05-18-2014, 12:26 PM   #5
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Zygote:
Smashem out the f’n park ace.. seriously “title” BOOM
and i had no idea you had this pic when i checked in, otherwise fact i would not have dropped that ish in there PERIOD..

1# OFF THE SHELF.. my ex was 2nd year bachelor of health science, hitting honors twice..
That ish flowed like butter..

2# not to be fucked with “syndicate wars” R rating.. wtf - “sensationalize death.” Hells yeh

3# And Heyy my names Generic Love Interest! Sold - And watch your mirror

4# Step up your game

Hugh breath.. massive – kinda like say you gave me a mouse trap clipped it to my penis everytime i turned on my tv.. and then and then i realized you didn’t give me a mouse trap, pop culture is divinity.. Also you’re a legend.. That is all

Vivid:
Enigmatic cinematic
cold shivers,
Reels, polaroid fills, stills- all of classic device...
Mate – straight to the point OK when a writer can dot point syllable to syllable – and catch every single drop of someones attention.. Mind blown..
The chop of the names, of what are labelled as great but are published in a manner of torture and glamour; was an ice pick with a lobotomy like stasis..
The clot.. heroin with plastic spoons – omg
“Neglect” smeared like a fucken scarlet letter

Vote = Zygote

now this is all the way down the line and my hand should not have been in this pot, and i apologize to the fullest..
Here voting on this was crazy, i went for fast paced running with the bombardment of everything all at once, instead of the dot point factor in the overwhelming sense of things.. which both had..
Brilliant guys..
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