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Old 05-17-2014, 01:48 AM   #4
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Intense. I think both takes were exceptional. JM took the downside to the verse where the content was loosely based on the thematic elements introduced. Soulstice told a story in theory. It all ends with perspective and which one was more polished. They both were about equally polished and I enjoyed both on a different spectrum, while soulstice had slick storytelling, the dialogue turned me off a tarn. & while JM had smooth transitional elements I think he lacked a central role or element in the introduction of his upload. Sometimes JM lost me with just the lack of a hyperfocused premise. voting for soulstice
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