Wow. Both very professional verses here. Adonis has taken a stride each week I've been here. Perpendicular delivered another tightly wound verse. Exceptional. Unfortunately, I can't see the pictures but thanks to Certain for mentioning them in the predictions! You must face reality of interstellar travel! Perpendicular delivered a double meaning -almost. That was the readers perspective, and I liked how they left some to the reader, rather than spelling it out for them. Adonis did spell it out, but not in the traditional sense. Very close and very, very awkward battle. Voting adonis as I see perpendicular had very weird wording/imagery towards the end that made me question it as a whole.
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