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Old 05-16-2014, 11:28 PM   #5
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Perp had a lot of great content, tons of great rhyming and metaphors etc. technicals were great. Felt it lacked an overall concept for the topic given. The Jim gaffigan line was pointless IMO. Adonis however had a more rounded read, the ending was gold. I felt Adonis outshines him with his content, perp had the genius rhyme schemes but a brought his best verse of the season.

Voting for Adonis, great verses by both.
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