Fuck, I just lost my breakdowns.
Perp - Tight verse, interesting use of black hues and the mention of light colors hinted at a racial statement. I liked how you wrapped it up at the end.
Adonis - You stepped up your game, using dense descriptive language about a harbinger of death during, after or before an apocalyptic setting. The ending almost made me lol.
I'm going with Perpendicular here, he had more purpose while writing it, IMO. The underlying message of his verse, or at least his subconscious intentions were more pronounced.
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