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Old 05-15-2014, 01:08 AM   #3
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Gushing hard over this rhyme man. I knew you had it in you. This was prime time baby. Good shit.

Quote:
two pulls and a pass. twenty paces and shoot
we're yin and yang, the archetypes like hades and zeus
is it you? i hear you breathing. insufflating delusion
it's pain, confusion, faith. it's intravenous, it's human
teenage mutants, grated sewer life is taking it's toll
an emperor destined to never make it to Rome
or make it to Cyprus. deadman island, staying patiently private
Marcus Aurelius mindset - reading Plato in silence
turn your wife into a deviant, your slave to a siren
screaming like a blade was perforating her hymen
deadlines i procrastinate like paper assignment
cause every statement feels like excavating a diamond
^ mega, especially the last 2 lines.


Thanks for the read. I needed that.
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