[PancakeBrah]

I'ma strip this loose screw 'til you can see its nuts.

fatality.

This was more raw/direct than usual. Still lovely. I think I like your more personal/"emo" pieces more. Although this wasn't purely aggressive, to say.

editz lolololooolikn

I think the fact you use paragraph style helps your style. When you read paragraph style you read it as sentences and the soft rhymes just hit you and the switchbacks seem so much more dope. Whereas your line by line pieces are just as dope, but sometimes glancing readers or people just feeding to feed don't catch the dopeness. Real perfect mesh of styles and format. I haven't been around forever but from context clues I know you've basically been using this style forever, and you can tell. Sometimes I read your paragraph shits and double back two or three times to catch all the rhymes. It's clever and a nice format vs. form debate starter.

Also your period placement/grammar usage is top notches.


Running a blade down the front of your face.

^well worded. struck me as i read it.