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Old 05-12-2014, 01:21 AM   #9
Cereal_Killa
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Certain:
artificial companionship
I will take two of those.. Only if it has actual intelligence..

The dark gloomy aura of dusk, dust.. its almost stale respite.. I can taste your opening stanza..
Straight into the hotcakes and melting butter.. I didn’t catch the scent in the second stanza but i hope you lead into on the third..
Massive wtf in the best way.. the dude stays there with his prosthetic model, trying to breathe life into it.. Now that is irony.. Ona double kick..

I fucken loved it man.. Nice one..

Vivid:
Syndicated Journalist
nice 
You set the scene, every mother fucker walks on in straight away with a smile on his face..
worth of paired masturbation!
I ejaculated..

FDA forbids it. Love that shit.. already want more

That’s how you fucken set up a verse, structure.. badah bing..

Vote = Vividlyvague

Man what a verse, you boys brought your ish.. thank you
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