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Old 05-12-2014, 12:57 AM   #9
Cereal_Killa
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Vulgar:
Truley insane.. Here you’re vocab is always, always fluent without a doubt.. What I was highly impressed with was the fact you brought back an older style you haven’t used since wordofchoice.com
Story wise man out the park, the pressure, the air.. dude i aint even playen, you took an angle i was going to take and made it your own.. As far as the crushed society.. the walls closing in – i was going for the cool-runnings joke and head straight for the buckeham palace and twist it.. But oh hell yeh the split through bringing your futuristic style straight back down to the core, to as real as it gets.. With a mammoth point.. Thats a hit.. I’m in love with it.. nice drop dude.

Oats:
From the opener land marking as if you where time framing (incredible)
What a f*cken opener..
sub headings
Not one hiccup

remove all garbagemen and managers from society - that idea will change
“capital” illusion

when in fact Anglo-Saxons were just packed in small communities
and their proximity to animals gave them bacterial immunities

but we need you to steer us from the lie of perpetual growth

To Whom it May Confound,

Now that is a verse.. from your substance as far as details and information, your pov and your style itself..
Well done
You will see pure hell, when you forget about the poor people..

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Massive battle guys.. Thank You
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