[Adonis]

V - Ever since the war to end all wars succeeded in inspiring a different one... Too dope. But also "This evening in London's all dark now" works fine, just read weird to me. damn foreigners. Enjoyed the phrasing of the ending, it really brought out your writers voice while adding a bit a flare to verse. Nice read through and through. You both took the same route, which as a voter makes it easier for me. I don't really have any complaints or complements as I simply enjoyed the read. Imagery of gas mask was enhanced when coupled with "chemical lint splinters sweater". Solid writing my friend.


Quaker - "but if worth is a reflection of scarcity, what’s that say about the value of a human?" too dope. This is as straight forward a verse there can be. The undertone is simple and done a million times over, but like the above quote you made this your own. To me, this is a paper you would read in a econ class and be like...WOW! But you did it rhyme forum, but that wasn't the focal point. No, it was the underlying message of we suck. Dope stuff here.



V/Oatsies

Vulgar had a short and too the point verse that was solid, but honestly this is a gem from Oats, and from what I've read thus far this week, VOTW easy