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Old 05-05-2014, 11:22 AM   #6
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Big baby reminds me of Baron in the way he has gone about it, but has nothing of the skill baron reps... Making it all a bit of a pain in the ass to read. I felt the flow was majorly choppy, however I tried reading it....the multis were super basic and simple. Also there wasn't punches... which I agree isn't a must in swag and flow, but the best swag and flow usually incorporate them.

Nik-As verse had solid flow, a more constructed rhyme scheme and more visual slag. He also incorporated some digs which was a cherry on top.

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