Timeless- this has an interesting focal point but quickly became convoluted with the whole putin thing. Then came that last stanza. I feel like you either hit a creative wall or rushed. Either way, some interesting ideas not fully expounded upon. I really wanted more of what you started with.
Adonis- this came off like a filler no show verse. An ode to aowl. Overall pretty cool, as most wouldn't try this, but as a person that is equally as ridiculously risk-heavy, i appreciated the drop. I think if some overt comedy was included this would have been an easier vote for me.
MVGT Adonis for a longer lasting impression and better overall experience, as timeless, while not bad, was mildly confusing.
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Last edited by e11even; 05-05-2014 at 03:08 AM.
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