Perp - Full of layers, yet rewarding. The construction was great, making this hard to beat. It was 'stylishly' designed, with keen attention given to internal rhyme schemes and tagged examples. The title reminded me of Solaris, and appropriately since you brought out your inner George Clooney regalism and wordsmithery. Yes, both are made up words. It was absurdist, highlighting irony with an anti-Kardashian nightstick, the tip covered in blood and graffiti paint. Maybe not blood, but another impressionable substance. Very cool take, I liked it.
oats - I love rap too! lol, 'tight' take on the topic. Offering your past times as the focus of a verse shows your spirit to compete and your passion for this medium. Everyone has their story of why they feel connected to something without having any real reasons why they do. It's part of what makes us human - the candles of vulnerability that light up our days. Good, neat verse.
My vote goes to Perp.
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